Talk:Fallout: Equestria/@comment-1713909-20120720015208/@comment-1713909-20121030000409

Someone who survives death because of some magical f@$%-all deus ex machina?? What do you call that? Good storytelling?? NO. It is NOT good story telling. It is CRAP story telling. It's a CRAP plot point for a CRAP character.

And the whole tumor business... To be honest, I don't really remember the fic much anymore. Dunno, guess I didn't expect a random anon to respond 3 months after I made a rant on the character. Oh well, I certainly don't plan on re-reading it! But judging by what you said, it sounds pretty f@$%ing retarded!

I was mainly complaining about the rape scene because it was an attempt to add drama and character development, but utterly failed due to its poor execution. Protip. SAYING YOU'RE BORED WHILE BEING RAPED DOES NOT MAKE YOU A SYMPATHETIC CHARACTER.

I'm not saying that Project Horizons was too long. No, Fallout Equestria is too bloody long. But the whole months thing was humerous exaggeration.

And yes, this is mainly my opinion. That's what my reviews tend to be.