Talk:Doomsday Ascending/@comment-4932866-20120602161800/@comment-1713909-20120602162055

Have to agree... While I like dark stories, judging by the summary of this, this seems just plain... ridiculous. While a dark story SHOULD be dark, there should be moments to "relax", and loosen up on the dark tides. This story utterly fails at that. It smothers you in the darkness, if you see what I mean, instead of covering you up like stories should.