My Little Pony Fan Labor Wiki talk:Workshop/A Shadow's Creed/@comment-4126310-20120312044240

Please rewrite the summary so it isn't a straight copy of the teaser on FIMFiction, to make it longer, and to make it generally less "book-blurby" ("will he succeed?" and similar questions are a sales pitch and do not belong in an encyclopaedic summary). The character section should also not be used to simply list all the characters (what use is that list to someone who doesn't know the story?).