My Little Pony Fan Labor Wiki talk:Workshop/Beholder/@comment-4126310-20120311012506

Considering that this is a pony wiki, there is far too little actual pony-related stuff on this page. Most of it is an explanation what beholders are, and an explanation copied wholesale from wikipedia at that, without attribution. One sentence and three images won't cut it.

Now, it is possible to rework this article and turn it into something interesting. Something about ponies transplanted into classic D&D scenarios, that would be fine and could use beholders as one example out of many. It could talk about how both D&D and MLP are owned by Hasbro, how D&D creatures have already appeared in the show, and how fans have expanded upon that both in fan art and in fan fiction (with concrete examples). But the article as it is now can't stay that way.