Talk:Celestia's Ascension to madness/@comment-4126310-20120122185338

The work that is covered by the article meets all the requirements for inclusion on the wiki, and it's actually very detailed and not just a one-paragraph description, so: thumbs up for that. But the article itself needs serious attention. Structurally, the two sections in the summary need to be merged and the summary expanded to include all of the story, not just the beginning. The character section should be more about the personality and look of the characters, less their role in the story (which belongs in the summary). The many spelling mistakes make it really hard to read.