Talk:Rainbow Factory/@comment-101.119.19.19-20130419124117/@comment-101.119.18.114-20130420053803

What are you talking about? So much work was put in this fanfic. Even if it involves torture of killing, I still think it's a good story. So to answer your question, this should be left the way it is. At least it doesn't involve an end of the world scenario. If you don't like this fanfic, why don't you just visit the Factory Rainbow Dash/Scootaloo pages at ask.tumblr (or whatever it's called). Those might cheer you up.