User blog:Heavymetalbronie/What makes a good fanfic errr..... good?

Alrighty then ponyfolks and awesome people.

Im new to being a fanfic writer and I am planning to make my own mini fan series entitled My little Rockstar Metal is magic.

The basic jist of it is that the mane 6 make friends with a bunch of misfits living in a mansion in the everfree forest, these misfits are in a rock band called the destroyers and the story is mostly based around them, the mane 6 and their adventures in equestria.

Only problem is I need help with it, like the structuring of the paragraphs punctuation and to try and make the story sound less boring and childish.

A current build of it is available on the bronies wiki under the name of MLR*MiM (if the link screwed up then sorry about that)