User blog comment:DMSwordsmaster/Stuff./@comment-4987919-20120612144619

Dude, your story is cool. It's not as violent or horrid as you make it out to be. You basically censored the gory details. Your villian plays comic releif along with his other duties. And as for the chapter 11, tentacles? Not that i'm complaining or anything (I prefer it this way). I enjoy a story for the cool characters and your story definitely has very much cool characters.

Just tell me why you spoil stuff beforehand in the author's comments.