Talk:Lyra/@comment-4559643-20111104062040/@comment-4559643-20111104132145

If there's something wrong with it, that means it should be changed. I'm an inexperienced wiki contributor, I make these kind of faux-pas.

I've reworded all of the weasel-worded phrases you pointed out, and added a few examples and references that I was able to find. I'm not sure if that fixed it or not, though.