User blog comment:Bleck11/Delete this blog please?/@comment-76.93.218.5-20121124092129/@comment-76.93.218.5-20121125072621

Alright. allow me to expand on my questions:

1. Why does he feel the need to turn the land into a world of darkness? ? What does he have to gain from it? ? Why would anyone join him? ? Are they being offered some nice benefits like dental? ? Being evil isn't exactly a career move, so you need to give a reason someone is evil. ? Nightmare Moon of so jealous she went insane, Discord was just a prick with to much power, and Chrysalis wanted to feed her colony.

2. Trust me, it actually is easy to create one from scratch, just take the time to flesh out your character and make them work in the world. ? Or be ironic and have fun making them as absurd as possible. ? Maybe a little bit of both. ? Also, King Sombra failed as a villain, and intimidation comes from not only design, but action. ? Queen Chrysalis pulled it off well. ? Until the last 5 minutes of the episode that is.

3. You find shoehorning him in alright, fine. ? However, if the hyena's don't have anything to do with the Lion King, then don't use Lion King characters for their picture. ? Just draw your own hyenas and the confusion will go away. ? Also, your use of Anders telling them "You'll never go hungry again!" is right out of the movie. ? Furthermore in real life, hyenas eat fairly well as far as african predators go.

4. Too many cooks spoil the broth.

I guess what I'm trying to say here, is you've created a pony version of Dr. Doom, minus the interesting traits that make him fun to watch. ? He has the castle, the minions, the evuls, and even the ambition, but I can't tell you anything about him. ? He's just evil for the sake of it, and so are his minions. ? Even his plans seem just generically evil. ? I'm not saying he's a bad character, he just needs to be fleshed out more than mwahaha let's take over the world pants.

P.S. Thanks for reading my initial TL;DR comment.