My Little Pony Fan Labor Wiki talk:Workshop/NetherLips/@comment-4126310-20120509234725/@comment-4126310-20120510182728

I could trim it myself, but because I have no first-hand experience and you have provided no sources, I'd likely make it worse. A couple of pointers:

I don't know the answer to any of those questions, but you presumably do. Answer them and you should get a short paragraph.
 * Where are these alternative episode ideas posted?
 * When were they posted?
 * Are they a reaction to something in particular?
 * Illustrate by paraphrasing one or two examples (instead of providing a whole list without context, as now).