User blog comment:Bleck11/uneeded blog/@comment-76.93.218.5-20130127051045/@comment-76.93.218.5-20130127210854

Dude, I'm starting to get the feeling you don't want opinions but rather blind praise, and considering the other OCs on the Bronies wiki, it's easy to see you're kind of the best of the worst.

You don't need to listen to critics, and honestly if you didn't ask for my opinion, I wouldn't have given one, considering your work is in truth a harmless silly story on a website I go out of my way to visit for a good laugh. However you did ask for my opinion and I have a much higher standard than the guys who make the self insertion, tragic backstory, over powered, pony maker and color clashing OCs you find on the Bronies wiki (though some of them are genuinely good). And the worst part too, I'm not alone, if you want your work to be taken seriously outside a very small niche community built by people with even lower standards than yourself, you need to stop asking for blind praise.

So as a summary, if you're going to ask for opinions, don't get so upset over criticism.

Also, I never said make him look like Discord, I said Discord weird looking but his body parts compliment each other just enough so he's not an eye sore.

And as for the motive, look it up, taking over the world, wanting to destroy the world and becoming a god are basically the three most cliched villain motives you can find. Your character's already a god (by nature), and now he wants to cover the world in darkness and destruction, and thus, take it over.

P.S. I don't want to talk to you "so much" about your characters, considering they've done nothing to actually bother me, or even entertain me, it's just good criticism is extensive. If you want me to stop criticisizing you, stop posting here and asking for opinions, as then I'll have no reason to do so.

Also just a note, most critics aren't trying to be mean, we give advice on how to improve something, and that's why it's important to get criticism from multiple people. Not blind praise, criticism.

Finally, also note it wouldn't matter if your character was the best friggin OC on the planet, their would still be room to improve.

By the way, I know you've been deleting criticism from Lord Ander's page.