Talk:Equestria Daily/@comment-4932866-20120715154013/@comment-4932866-20120803031529

Well, thanks for the sympthy from you guys. You're awesome. I took their advice however and rewrote the first two chapters (I personally think I could have written chapter two a little better, but, oh well.) Anyways, I posted the story to FIMFiction.net, and if you want you can read the revised version here Tell me what you think!